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Recommendations for the Nursing Page

In general

  • Add a persuasive elements
  • Make key call to actions more visual
  • Break up text on page where possible into bullet points

Introduction

Simplify the headline, “Put your compassion to work as you earn an associate’s degree in nursing and prepare for your licensure exam. Options include immediate employment or transfer to a four-year college. We also offer a LPN to RN bridge program.”

“Put your compassion to work with a degree in nursing.”

Add introductory text above the section titled “Jump To: and beneath the image header:

Earn an associate’s degree in nursing and prepare for your licensure exam. Options include immediate employment or transfer to a four-year college. We also offer a LPN to RN bridge program.

About the Program

Re-title the About the Program section “Information Sessions” – it’s clearer

Add a subheading titled Accreditation and move related content under that heading. It doesn’t feel closely related to the content in Information Sessions.

Get Started section

Consider making these pathways more graphical and give them more visual weight on the page

Student Testimonials

Include a testimonial from a graduate of the program that reflects how the Pierce College program has influenced their career path in nursing.

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